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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Mon Oct 11, 2010 6:22 pm

...::::Welcome :::...

Hello, I am Brazilian and I want you guys enjoy my animations.
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Post  Beast on Mon Oct 11, 2010 7:28 pm

pretty good,keep up the good work and you'll be in intermediate in no time in no time

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Post  Valor on Mon Oct 11, 2010 10:10 pm

pretty nice, man. Keep it up. You got everything down, just practive it, and it'll take you to the top. Make sure you try something new, too.
"Without mistakes, there would be no improvement"
What's the fun in that?

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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Tue Oct 12, 2010 4:04 pm

really no fun
vo try something new
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Post  Rabees on Wed Oct 13, 2010 7:54 pm

Those are't bad. You should try to not have such long pauses in your animations however, it ruins the flow. You could also accelerate the limbs more (ease).

What language do you speak? Portuguese?

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Post  DinoMan05 on Thu Oct 14, 2010 7:43 pm

Rabees wrote:Those are't bad. You should try to not have such long pauses in your animations however, it ruins the flow. You could also accelerate the limbs more (ease).

What language do you speak? Portuguese?
he's from brazil. waht do you think. btw I'm guessing ur a admin at pivot epic now.... because I finally got banned

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Post  Valor on Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:30 pm

Off-topic. Please do not post something other than something related to PivotHangout, or this animation thread.

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Post  Rabees on Fri Oct 15, 2010 12:20 pm

How would I know what they speak in Brazil? B/
And don't bring your sour feelings from Pivot Epic here. :T

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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:02 pm

Our feelings are the same as its pivot by
our language is the Portuguese language.
can translate using the google translator
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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Mon Nov 08, 2010 10:08 am

new anime ||beam||
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Post  Valor on Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:44 pm

Pretty nice, man! The only thing I would work on is the feet.
When running across the screen at the end, the orgin seemed to be moving down into the corner. Don't do that unless it was meant to.
Another thing is on the flip. You don't need to ease the flip until you land. Keep the flip at the same speed and distance, and then when the foot touches the ground, ease.
Simple.

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Post  Beast on Wed Nov 10, 2010 7:53 pm

i think you've gotten a little better.there's more flow

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Post  Beast on Mon Nov 15, 2010 6:28 pm

sorry to double post but i think you are soon to be interz make one or two more animations and we'll see

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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Mon Nov 15, 2010 9:08 pm

our good, I'm working on an animation major
this week
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Post  Valor on Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:57 pm

Lol, it's awesome having a Brazilian here, I picture him talking like Yoda. "Making major animating this week, I am."
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But yeah, Grimmjow. We'll move ya to interz when you're done. No gareuntee, but a high possibility.

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Post  Beast on Mon Nov 15, 2010 11:45 pm

lol valor

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Post  .:-oDUSTINo-:. on Tue Nov 16, 2010 11:43 am

pretty good I would say move up but lets hear from others.. great job though Very Happy

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Post  SomeRandomGuy on Tue Nov 16, 2010 8:32 pm

It's very stiffy.

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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Wed Nov 17, 2010 1:05 pm

thanks guys.
Intermediate I wait lol
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Post  SomeRandomGuy on Wed Nov 17, 2010 5:05 pm

Alright.
Everything is awesome. It is just a bit stiff is all.
Anyway, You are doing greatly. Keep up the good work.

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Post  Beast on Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:19 pm

i only wish to see one new animation from you to determine the move or not so put a lot of hard work into you next anim,your chances are pretty high

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Post  Valor on Wed Nov 17, 2010 8:41 pm

I noticed something on your Newest...
At the end, the guy kinda looks like he's floating up. The body was well eased to end it, but the leg ruined it at the end. It wasn't that eased.
Just something you can fix.
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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:01 pm

new anime
inter ?
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Post  Beast on Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:27 pm

its real eased and smooth,and has very thought out effects.it also has a lot of flow...~Moved To Interz

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Post  SomeRandomGuy on Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:02 pm

*is jealous*
Very Interz. Nice going!

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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Fri Nov 19, 2010 11:26 pm

fighting.
really wanted to go inter
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Post  Valor on Sat Nov 20, 2010 10:20 am

Grats on Interz but I did see one flaw with it.
After the second blow to the invisible stick, the feet were a little shakey. That may just be the .gif but yeh=ah.
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Post  Grimmjow 6 on Wed Dec 01, 2010 8:41 pm

New Animation
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Post  Valor on Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:11 pm

Your animations are near perfect, but there is always one slight problem.

You get lazy at the end...

You always do well until the end, and give up.
Animate to the end, bro.

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Post  Admin on Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:59 am

Your newest animations footplacement is off at alot of places, there is also shakyness.
The run in the beginning was horrible, and the throw looked off.

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