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Post  pivotphone on Tue Nov 02, 2010 12:15 pm

New animation anyone think i deserve a move up i can be bias to myself can I.

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Post  Beast on Tue Nov 02, 2010 5:30 pm

your not ready to move just yet
i can see the problems i just can't pick them out and tell

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Post  Valor on Tue Nov 02, 2010 10:36 pm

Shakeyness seems to be your only big problem.
You're a bit stiff too...

But I like the animations. Well done.

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Re: Mr awsomes pivot thread quite old

Post  pivotphone on Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:33 am

ok the bottom one is bad ignore that what about the top to there all eased and they aint shakeness Sad
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Re: Mr awsomes pivot thread quite old

Post  Valor on Wed Nov 03, 2010 8:49 am

OK, the top one isn't that bad!
It seems choppy at some parts, but that may be my crappy connection.
But what IS true, is that it's rushed in some parts. Take your time... no going: Sleep
It is stiff a bit too. Even if it's a close-up, you should still move every joint you can.

And add some explosions is your gunshots!!! They're just LINES!!!! Mad

Nice job overall. Razz

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Post  .:-oDUSTINo-:. on Sat Nov 06, 2010 8:25 pm

it's pretty good but I dislike how on the first one he's moving alot in the air for example : in the beginning he shakes.. a lot

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