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Post  Valor on Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:27 pm

Valor here, and these are my animations~

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~This is a huuuge~ rustbreaker. Don't exactly rate, just tell me what I can do.

That was my first animation on here, so it's kinda short.

Updating often!~

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Post  Beast on Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:36 pm

i like it ,its real good for a rust breaker,but there is one thing i noticed.the black sticks hand looks like i didn't make contact.Try overlapping a bit on contact

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Post  Admin on Mon Dec 13, 2010 2:19 pm

The footplacement is off, and the way it just 'slided' forward at the start was unrealistic, the way it turns around while spinning its arm is uneased.

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